Saturday, 13 October 2012

Short Story - Diary Unknown by Steven Frank McHugh


(The following is a short story that I have written in the style of an anonyms letter/ diary entry of a man trying to some up his despair around his and the dreams of others. The character is someone who is in his late 50’s approaching his 60’s and in a state of reflection over what he considers his missteps in life.)

‘These aren’t the days I will be remembered for.’ It’s something my dying grandfather said to me when I was a child. And in these most recent of years it is something in private I have often related to myself. I think of my dreams and aspirations, and how over these past few years as my age has grown closer to his in the time of his passing, these things which in many define a man, have in myself dwindled into an incomprehensible decline.

       As this happened I have tried to this point vain to examine where I have gone wrong. But even as I do so my mind wanders to that old man as my grandfather was from what I remember of him, how even a simple man as he was would once have had dreams an aspirations of his own. No man dreams to labor for others but these roles must be filled and in time reality takes its toll until we realize how we must all at some point in our lives accept some ill that maybe out of our capacity to dictate. Yet these dreams do not simply disappear and fade away. Instead they linger on, pushed to the back of our minds haunting us constantly as puppets of our subconscious. These dreams linger in the eyes of dreamers all around us. I see it in the eyes of those we pass aimlessly in the streets, the tears in their eyes linger un-reaped, but it is they’re unquestionably haunting their thoughts. The what ifs, the what’s that were and the things that will never be. These things haunt my mind to an unquestionable intensity.

       And yet I hear in others the excited gnashes and revelations of night dreams. These unlike the dreams of reality are often seen with whimsical pretenses as though they hold the deep secrets of life and the high importance of its meaning. They show us new and other worlds not bound by the limits of our own intellect or strains of our own societal falsies. Worlds in which we can take up the presences of kings and queens, cities built in such grandeur that they be only possible in comprehension with the power of the human psyche.

       I hear the stories of people who revel in these false paradises as if by even in their projected illusions they have truly experienced these fantastical events. In these revelations the author of these accounts always addresses the imagery as opposed to the comprehension of the addressed events. Imagery, sounds and smells, the way the objects felt and yet never a conscious comprehension of these things. These all seem, (well at least to me) to be an after thought, compiled and comprehended in review of the previous experiences. It is as though the person themselves wasn’t in control of there actions, (or at least to some part again, of those things around them).

       So you see like reality itself we are not truly in control of our own experiences and foretold destinations. Although the surroundings may seem more desired than those of the real world, there is still a strong surreal undertone of our dreams that I myself believe to be caused by our lack of control in these very personnel strangely idyllic settings. I know that many would question the authenticity of such a statement and I do not wish to really attach my name to this work for the chance it may ever leak out. But for those who are willing to listen to the thoughts from a diary unknown then I will most certainly explain the origins of my thinking.

       It began only a few years ago, before my interest had ever as much as wondered about the origins of such small a microcosm as dreams. It had been a day like any other; nothing had been out of the ordinary when I had gone to bed. But it was deep into my sleep that I was suddenly transported to a graveyard and just as sudden I realized I was at a funeral with no recollection of how I had gotten to this place. I studied my surroundings but by my observations alone it appeared I was the only one there. I noticed then that I was standing at a new grave however I did not bend down to see the name as I was more concerned with finding a friendly face of which one could hopefully tell me how I had got to this place. But it was at this moment a young girl approached from the distance. It was a strange moment as I stood there looking on. I had never seen this child before but I remember thinking in the dream itself that I somehow knew her. The girl, like myself was dressed in all black, it was clear then to me that she must be a mourner of this empty funeral party of which I was a part. As the girl approached my mind began to wander more away from its previous contentions and more towards the origins of this young child who had appeared as from all appearance I could comprehend, on her own.

       When the girl approached me she revealed something, which took me by surprise and yet I was not taken aghast. The child revealed to me that I was her father and that this was her mother’s funeral. I questioned the possibility of this child being my own, looking into her eyes as she looked shyly at myself, with her eyes every so often gazing down to the ground. I began noticing similarities in her facial features to that of mine. She had deep brown eyes like my own, although hers seem to be glistening in the light. Her hair was also a dark brown which was much similar to how my own had been in my youth, before its color had receded to its current state of a brown dusted grey. Because of these similarities I came to the conclusion that this child must in fact be mine. So at that moment I made a promise to my daughter that I would take care of her no mater what, and that she would always be safe and loved in the care of her father. Yet even as I did so I was not entirely convinced of my own abilities to take care of this child. Being a father is a role of which I hadn’t put much comprehension into. I began to worry of abilities to do this successfully but I did, to myself at least, come to the decision that no matter how I felt that I would do the best I could for this girl.
      
       And in the time that passed I began to accomplish this, the more time we spent together the more I grew attached to her. My skills as a father also developed, as my nerves were replaced with love and pride which in time ran in ways I have never felt so. In my past work, which for reasons I shall keep my own will remain secret, I have often felt that I was somehow not reaching the echelons which I felt in myself and in my own abilities that I should and could be able to achieve. Many a night such thoughts have kept me awake, as I would re-examine past work in ways to better prepare myself for future ventures. And yet here as a father I finally felt at peace, I was by no means an expert but I was happy, I was doing well, and I cared for this child to a degree I had not cared for anything or anyone since.

       Yet, at a latter point I returned home one day to find my daughter had gone. I began at that point to search the house whilst calling her name, (which for all sense and reason I can not remember in this state of reality). I searched upstairs in bedrooms, bathroom and toilet but she was nowhere to be seen. More importantly it was at this point I realized there was no sign of her or where she may possibly have went. It was then that a deep feeling of dread began to grow inside me. All manner of thoughts began to cross my mind and as suddenly this great fear approached. I very much doubt that any words could comprehend these feelings or emotions but for the point of my story I will attempt to encompass them to some degree. The fear was greater than anything that I had previously thought possible. As it grew inside of me it felt as though someone had held me down and began ripping at my stomach. As the feelings grew pressure mounted and it began to feel as though more sharp objects were being inserted into my abdomen whilst at the same moment two heavyset men began a tug of war over my intestines.

       I soon left my house to visit others to see if she had wandered to the home of a friend or neighbor. I didn’t ring the police or even think of such a thing, my mind was set on finding her and any other thought was a distraction that stood between those chances. I talked to friends and family but no one had seen her. It was at this time when my mind had become physically exhausted and my anxieties at their peak that I awoke so intensely.
I sat up, still not having gained my bearings of what had happened or where I was. After a few minutes I realized that I was back in my bedroom and began to grasp the fictitious nature of my past experiences. I began to re-examine in detail all of these personnel events which, in my mind only had come to pass. The daughter I never had, the pride I felt over the abstract projections of a fictitious fantasy. My mind had created this paradise for me and had just as quickly snatched it away. I am by nature not an emotional man, but I would find the world hard pressed not to shed a tear as I myself did in the waking’s of this most bitter reality. It had all felt so real at the time as I felt within the dream comprehensively analyzing my situations and acting accordingly. This wasn’t a surreal stand off between my conscious and subconscious, I wasn’t being dragged into a fantasy world where I had no control as to the exterior surroundings, I was consciously making decisions with real consequences, or... so I thought.

       But my true investment in the actions of my dream began to disrupt my thinking in latter weeks. The loss of a child is an intense and horrifying notion for anyone to comprehend, but to come to the realization that a child which from your memories had existed only to be taken away violently from you into the subconscious world of fantasy is something else altogether. For there can be no grievance in such circumstances as the loss of a fictitious child from a fictitious world. Such a scene would cause calls of others to shout of madness, and to a degree rightly so. For the mothers, fathers, friends and family of reality can happily grieve their loses but those who have lost out to our dreams must sit and wait patiently to suffer in silence.

       And yet as the years have passed between that dream and now my life has turned in wake, I still think back to those false memories and those events that took place. I think of those days we spent with one another and the relative security of my financial position in reality and nevertheless, I would give all that away for one more chance to live within that world. I would give any and all things to experience that place and live a life as the father I was again, even in knowing that it all would not be real, I would still rather live that way than be continually haunted by these dreams as others are in this reality which we find ourselves in today. Not even to the worst of my enemies would I curse to experience such a thing as this.

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